How to handle gore



My latest dilemma comes from trying to be realistic about a shooting scene and not gross my readers out. It was hard. I finally did it, though. I told it from the point of view of Sam, who had been wounded on the side of his face. He was in shock and therefore he did his best to deny and block out all that was going on around him.
        Now, Sam will have a great scar on his right cheekbone and a hardly noticeable nick in his hairline above his ear. What do you think? Will he be sexier that way?

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